My name is Niki, nice to see you here!
This is the first time I use & paly blogger....still learning....
Talking about myself, well, I was born & live in Tainan since hundred years ago... (cold ~"~)
Anyway, Tainan is the most beautiful & nice place I ever been.
I use English because my job requires me to do so.
But, that's for businss.
I do not think that is real writing and I think have to learn more about English.
I come here to improve my English ability and upgrade my English leval.
That's why I came here.
This is the first time I use & paly blogger....still learning....
Talking about myself, well, I was born & live in Tainan since hundred years ago... (cold ~"~)
Anyway, Tainan is the most beautiful & nice place I ever been.
I use English because my job requires me to do so.
But, that's for businss.
I do not think that is real writing and I think have to learn more about English.
I come here to improve my English ability and upgrade my English leval.
That's why I came here.
English to me, is kind of tool for me to see the world, to make friend with someone who I want to know, to make money and make my life different.
That's all about me.
Tks!
posted by AhSu at
5:34 AM
1 Comments:
Hello Niki,
It's nice to see you here, too.
Here are some suggestions for you:
1. I born & live
-->I was born ...
2. I use English for wirtting almost everyday.
Because of my job requires me to do.
-->You can combine these two sentences together.
-->I ... because my job requires me to do so.
-->Becuase of + Noun
Becuase + clause
3.To improve my English ability and upgrade my English leval.
That's why I came here.
-->Try to make complete sentences:
I come here to...
4. English to me, is kind of tooling for me to see the world, to make friend with someone who I want to know, to make money and make a change of my life different.That's all about me.
Tks!
-->tool
-->make my life different
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