To review my past life, I think I can separate it into 3 significant stages.
It has been changed and is all about "study".
My high school life was in the remote past hard to remember...
Before 20 years old, when I was in high school, I was the student who did not think too much about the future and didn’t know what I want to be.
Going to school was just because my mother told me that at least I have to finish the high school and to get the record of the school.
Therefore, when I graduated from the high school I started to work as an assistant and accountant because I majored in accounting at high school.
Frankly speaking, I did not like my post because in fact I’m not good at figures.
I changed lot of jobs…worked in different types of company.
But the first change appears when I was about 25 years old, I worked in a trading company and there is a co-worker who once studies overseas.
At the moment I still was an assistant and I admired her abilities.
She taught me a lot and also encouraged me to study abroad.
Then, I had a short term study in UK for seven months.
After came back I tried to find a job with related in English.
Unfortunately, I was not lucky enough to have it….
I continued to work till 30, one of my friend asked me to take the entrance test for 2-year night college course together.
I was luck to pass entrance exam and got the chance to go back school to study English again.
I cherished the opportunity I had and felt I must learn more and study harder.
So I started part work, part study for 3 years.
It was not easy but I achieved and I think I did pretty good job.
After graduated from 2-year night college, I found a trade work to start my dream until now.
I like my job and enjoy working everyday.
I can learn many different things, meet people from different countries and make more money of course.
Now, I’m 40, after working about 7 years for trade, I realize that my English ability is still insufficient so I come back to school to continue learning more again.
This time, I’m feeling excited, but also feel disquietude.
Because of my job is very busy and sometimes I need to go abroad.
Can I take good care for both of my job and study this time?
My mom is happy and support me to come back school, she just worries about my health.
However, I will treat it as a challenge and do my best to fulfill the mission because I want to move forward and have more confidence not only for my job.
It has been changed and is all about "study".
My high school life was in the remote past hard to remember...
Before 20 years old, when I was in high school, I was the student who did not think too much about the future and didn’t know what I want to be.
Going to school was just because my mother told me that at least I have to finish the high school and to get the record of the school.
Therefore, when I graduated from the high school I started to work as an assistant and accountant because I majored in accounting at high school.
Frankly speaking, I did not like my post because in fact I’m not good at figures.
I changed lot of jobs…worked in different types of company.
But the first change appears when I was about 25 years old, I worked in a trading company and there is a co-worker who once studies overseas.
At the moment I still was an assistant and I admired her abilities.
She taught me a lot and also encouraged me to study abroad.
Then, I had a short term study in UK for seven months.
After came back I tried to find a job with related in English.
Unfortunately, I was not lucky enough to have it….
I continued to work till 30, one of my friend asked me to take the entrance test for 2-year night college course together.
I was luck to pass entrance exam and got the chance to go back school to study English again.
I cherished the opportunity I had and felt I must learn more and study harder.
So I started part work, part study for 3 years.
It was not easy but I achieved and I think I did pretty good job.
After graduated from 2-year night college, I found a trade work to start my dream until now.
I like my job and enjoy working everyday.
I can learn many different things, meet people from different countries and make more money of course.
Now, I’m 40, after working about 7 years for trade, I realize that my English ability is still insufficient so I come back to school to continue learning more again.
This time, I’m feeling excited, but also feel disquietude.
Because of my job is very busy and sometimes I need to go abroad.
Can I take good care for both of my job and study this time?
My mom is happy and support me to come back school, she just worries about my health.
However, I will treat it as a challenge and do my best to fulfill the mission because I want to move forward and have more confidence not only for my job.

1 Comments:
Hello NiKi,
Great job! Interesting story!
I am sure you will do well here.
1.Go to school just because my mother told me that at least I have to finish the high school and to get the record of the school.
-->Going to school was just ...
2.because of I was major in accounting at high school.
-->becuase I majored in...
check 'becuase' and 'becuase of':
http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=6581&dict=CALD
3. participate the test of night time
-->take the entrance test for 2-year night college course
4.meet different country people
-->meet people from different countries
5. I realize that my English ability still insufficient so that I coming back school to continue learning more again.
-->...is still insufficient so I come back to school
6.This time, I’m feeling exciting, but also feel disquietude
-->excited
7.Because of my job is very busy and sometimes need to go abroad.
--> someimtes I need to...
--> Combine this sentence with the previous one.
8.My mom is happy and support me to come back school, she just worry about my health.
-->she ... worries
9.However, I will treat it as a challenge and do my best to fulfill the mission.
Because I want to move forward and have more confidence not only for my job.
-->I will... becuase + clause...
10. After writing a sentence, remember to check if it is a complete one.
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