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Wednesday, October 04, 2006

To review my past life, I think I can separate it into 3 significant stages.
It has been changed and is all about "study".

My high school life was in the remote past hard to remember...
Before 20 years old, when I was in high school, I was the student who did not think too much about the future and didn’t know what I want to be.
Going to school was just because my mother told me that at least I have to finish the high school and to get the record of the school.
Therefore, when I graduated from the high school I started to work as an assistant and accountant because I majored in accounting at high school.
Frankly speaking, I did not like my post because in fact I’m not good at figures.
I changed lot of jobs…worked in different types of company.
But the first change appears when I was about 25 years old, I worked in a trading company and there is a co-worker who once studies overseas.
At the moment I still was an assistant and I admired her abilities.
She taught me a lot and also encouraged me to study abroad.
Then, I had a short term study in UK for seven months.
After came back I tried to find a job with related in English.
Unfortunately, I was not lucky enough to have it….

I continued to work till 30, one of my friend asked me to take the entrance test for 2-year night college course together.
I was luck to pass entrance exam and got the chance to go back school to study English again.
I cherished the opportunity I had and felt I must learn more and study harder.
So I started part work, part study for 3 years.
It was not easy but I achieved and I think I did pretty good job.
After graduated from 2-year night college, I found a trade work to start my dream until now.
I like my job and enjoy working everyday.
I can learn many different things, meet people from different countries and make more money of course.

Now, I’m 40, after working about 7 years for trade, I realize that my English ability is still insufficient so I come back to school to continue learning more again.
This time, I’m feeling excited, but also feel disquietude.
Because of my job is very busy and sometimes I need to go abroad.
Can I take good care for both of my job and study this time?
My mom is happy and support me to come back school, she just worries about my health.
However, I will treat it as a challenge and do my best to fulfill the mission because I want to move forward and have more confidence not only for my job.

1 Comments:

  • Hello NiKi,

    Great job! Interesting story!
    I am sure you will do well here.


    1.Go to school just because my mother told me that at least I have to finish the high school and to get the record of the school.
    -->Going to school was just ...

    2.because of I was major in accounting at high school.
    -->becuase I majored in...

    check 'becuase' and 'becuase of':
    http://dictionary.cambridge.org/define.asp?key=6581&dict=CALD

    3. participate the test of night time
    -->take the entrance test for 2-year night college course

    4.meet different country people
    -->meet people from different countries

    5. I realize that my English ability still insufficient so that I coming back school to continue learning more again.
    -->...is still insufficient so I come back to school

    6.This time, I’m feeling exciting, but also feel disquietude

    -->excited

    7.Because of my job is very busy and sometimes need to go abroad.
    --> someimtes I need to...
    --> Combine this sentence with the previous one.




    8.My mom is happy and support me to come back school, she just worry about my health.
    -->she ... worries


    9.However, I will treat it as a challenge and do my best to fulfill the mission.

    Because I want to move forward and have more confidence not only for my job.
    -->I will... becuase + clause...

    10. After writing a sentence, remember to check if it is a complete one.

    By Blogger Yuhsiuwriting, At 1:48 AM  

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