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Wednesday, November 29, 2006

Why people want to get into a marriage?
In the Nature, most of creatures choose to live in groups.
The habit of living together develops partly due to the demand of survival
and partly due to instincts.
The biggest difference between humanity and animals is human has "thought"
and "marriage".
When human beings choose his/her companion they need to consider not only
physiological but also psychological factors.
What are the reasons that bring a person into a marriage and what is it like?

Animals do not have marriage.
They have only physiological demand for multiplication next generation.
But, human beings are different, we have "thought" and "emotions"
The thought and emotions tell us to find a proper companion to live together.
This is complex but also simple to be traced.
One of the good reasons for people to get married must because of the need to care
and to be cared.
Everybody needs to be cared and needs about and warm touch.


If you find a person who really concerns about you and make you feels
not lonely to live in this planet, you can have a caring person to accompany with.
How can you refuse him/her?

The other good reasons can be respect, similar thinking and values.
Due to the fact that we are human, our mentality tells us that we need to be respected
and also to respect others.
To be respected is a force for a person to move toward especially this power
is from a person who you loved.
It is a magical power to grow up a person.
Beside, people who share similar thinking thinking and values tend to stay longer and happier together.

Does a marriage exist only nice part to people?
A marriage is just another kind of lifestyle; it of course has its responsibility.
As the saying goes, how much you want to gain, how much you need to pay.
You need to pay most of your time and money for this new family and
to grow up yourself and to be stronger to face all challenges.
Especially when you have children need to take care of.

Some people said that a marriage needs to be taken care of and managed as
doing a business.
Life can be so beautiful just depends on what do you want and what do you need.
No matter what is your choice, know yourself and prepare for the future.

1 Comments:

  • Very interesting topic and ideas. Try to pay more attention to the language you use to express these ideas!


    What does the reason bring a person into a marriage and what is it like?
    -->What are the reasons that bring...


    because of care
    -->because of the need to care and to be cared.

    Everybody needs to be care about and warm touch.
    -->...needs to be cared and needs...


    If you find a person who really concerns about you and make you feels
    not lonely to live in this planet.
    You can have a caring person to accompany with.
    -->Combine these two sentences together.

    If..., you can ..to accompany you.

    refuse he/she?-->refuse him/her?

    same thinking and same values.
    -->similar

    Due to we are human,
    -->Due to the fact that we...

    our mentality tell us -->tells


    To be respected is a force for a person to move toward especially this power
    is from a person who you loved.
    -->toward what?
    -->Can you make this sentence more clear?


    It is a magical power to grow up a person.
    -->grow up a person?

    The same thinking and same values can create two peoples' joys of life
    to stay together longer and happier
    -->Besides, people who share similar thinking and values tend to stay longer and happier together.




    Does a marriage existing nice part only?
    -->Does...exist ...
    -->part only? What do you mean here?


    A marriage is just another kind of life;
    -->kind of lifestyle


    How much you want to gain, how much you need to pay.
    -->As the saying goes, '....'



    Especially when you have children need to be take care with.
    -->, especially when you have children to take care of


    Some people said that a marriage needs to be take care and managed as
    doing a business.
    -->taken care of


    No matter what’s the selection you choose, just recognize yourself and prepare up
    for the future.
    -->what is your choice, know youself and prepare for...

    By Blogger Yuhsiuwriting, At 10:46 PM  

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