I'm a middle-aged woman with long wavy hair and bangs.
My face is round and got some freckles and wrinkles in it.
I think that I'm a plump woman not a slim woman.
Today, I'm wearing a black T-shirt, jean, pink jacket and sliver bracelet.
Talking of my characters, I think my friends will tell you that I'm a responsible person.
The main reason that creates my disposition perhaps in my growth environment.
I am the middle child.
I have a brother and a young sister.
Since childhood, I need to be strong to help my mother for housework and should be independent for taking care of my five years younger sister.
Because my brother is the only boy who is treasure to a traditional family like our.
These factors help me in the work a lots.
However, as an adult I appreciate for my family.
But, it also turn me become a boring persond not flexible!
My face is round and got some freckles and wrinkles in it.
I think that I'm a plump woman not a slim woman.
Today, I'm wearing a black T-shirt, jean, pink jacket and sliver bracelet.
Talking of my characters, I think my friends will tell you that I'm a responsible person.
The main reason that creates my disposition perhaps in my growth environment.
I am the middle child.
I have a brother and a young sister.
Since childhood, I need to be strong to help my mother for housework and should be independent for taking care of my five years younger sister.
Because my brother is the only boy who is treasure to a traditional family like our.
These factors help me in the work a lots.
However, as an adult I appreciate for my family.
But, it also turn me become a boring persond not flexible!
posted by AhSu at
9:22 AM
1 Comments:
I think that I'm a plump woman not a slim woman.
-->...I'm a plump woman, not a slim one.
jean-->jeans
The main reason that creates my disposition perhaps in my growth environment.
-->creates (how about 'influences'?)
my five years younger sister
-->five-year-old younger sister because
Because my brother is the only boy who is treasure to a traditional family like our.
-->combine this sentence with the previous one.
-->( Result) + because (Cause...)
-->because as the only child, my brother is a treasure...
-->like ours
These factors help me in the work a lots.
-->How? How did your childhood experience shape your attitudes or values?
a lots-->a lot
However, as an adult I appreciate for my family.
But, it also turn me become a boring persond not flexible!
-->I appreciate my family (for what they have done for me/for the training they gave me).
-->it also turned me into a boring and not very flexible person!
It seems you have thought about yourself and know yourself very well! Once you know how you are, you can always try to improve the parts you don't like that much! Don't you think so?
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